Comments on: The Opening Sentence

By: Tracy

Tracy — Thu, 06 May 2010 20:20:02 +0000

Of all I would continue with the #5.
The others are melodramatic and choppy.
The fifth is mysterious and could be the beginning of either a short story, a poem or an epic journey.
I would probably pay good money to hear the rest of that.
The others made me just wince, frankly.

By: Guy Fernandez

Guy Fernandez — Fri, 30 Apr 2010 05:18:10 +0000

#4 left a taste in my mind. I can visualize it. What would that cologne be… aqua d’gio? Nope… Axe Body Spray – the chocolate one? lol The tune he was singing… how about that whistling song played in Kill Bill. lol…. Maybe the song by Jamie Fox and Akon saying “She ain’t nothing but a gold digger”… with an innocent smirk, why not????

By: Zeta

Zeta — Mon, 12 Apr 2010 22:36:07 +0000

I would say n°1 is the best to attract attention. And as many people choose n°2, i will just say that an horrific story can be written upon that, but it’s definitely not my style.

By: Noelle

Noelle — Fri, 26 Mar 2010 23:13:30 +0000

number two !!!

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By: biggie7385

biggie7385 — Fri, 19 Mar 2010 20:39:33 +0000

definitely number 2.

By: Derrick

Derrick — Wed, 24 Feb 2010 13:10:10 +0000

i like #5 #2 is also weirdly compelling

By: lucky khan

lucky khan — Mon, 22 Feb 2010 11:08:59 +0000

i like u denise .u look awsome in black dress.

By: Nathan

Nathan — Fri, 22 Jan 2010 00:36:47 +0000

In order of favorite to least favorite: 5, 2, 4, 3, 1

By: Miss Marilyn Darling

Miss Marilyn Darling — Fri, 15 Jan 2010 20:54:10 +0000

i like this one best
4 – There he was, singing his annoying little tune and strolling along with that innocent smirk across his face, wearing his cologne that you can smell from a mile away. That cologne that gave Charlotte a chill up her spine

cant wait to see what you do with it